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The second chapter of Deathjester in the Sad Star Soldiers chronicles
Coming next : The Lost Memories CH3 : The Awakening

edit: changed a few sentences so that the story flow correctly
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Aside from the missing periods or commas, the sequence of this chapter is great. A little bit fast though but it's a nice read. Just try fixing your punctuations, it's still better to read something you know is correct. ;)